Comments on: The Other Side of Spanking http://chocoholic.edublogs.org/2009/02/20/the-other-side-of-spanking/ 'Cause thinking tastes good Tue, 24 Feb 2009 17:47:12 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: lisahuff http://chocoholic.edublogs.org/2009/02/20/the-other-side-of-spanking/comment-page-1/#comment-15 lisahuff Fri, 20 Feb 2009 17:29:42 +0000 http://chocoholic.edublogs.org/?p=17#comment-15 good point. good evidence. limited warrant. you say: "This proves that even corporal punishment not categorized as abuse can increase the risk of psychological disorders in adults." I say: This is really your only commentary on the evidence you've pulled from other sources. To build a strong argument you must warrant/justify this evidence. Add commentary to link your evidence to your claim, to explain how this evidence helps make your case. good point. good evidence. limited warrant.

you say: “This proves that even corporal punishment not categorized as abuse can increase the risk of psychological disorders in adults.”

I say: This is really your only commentary on the evidence you’ve pulled from other sources. To build a strong argument you must warrant/justify this evidence. Add commentary to link your evidence to your claim, to explain how this evidence helps make your case.

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